Good Mooooorning ^-^ Today I'm in high spirits ^-^ Woke up to find 4 new emails in my mail box, one of the a very very positive flattering review and the other 3 were 1.An author put a story alert on you story 2.An author put a favourite story alert 3.An author put a favourite author alert *-*

and my review:This chapter was a great improvement upon the first chapter. The dialogue
flowed much more smoothly. The descriptions and action felt natural and not
rushed while not being too slow.

The plot is definitely picking up and I wonder how Xelloss is going to explain
this. XD

Ok well I admit the first chapter was ... dissatisfying, I didn't know where to start at all, since it's been 4 years and more since I wrote anything.

But anyway having people read my stoy and actually liking it makes a lot for me ^-^ Today chapter.3, just cause I like people review me.

Buh Bye folks~

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